There is no such thing as being individual there is always something else involved like Twinkies individually wrapped but part of a box.

Thursday, January 17, 2013

Snow


Snow Plummets 
Radically Spinning and Turning
Out of control
Crashing 
Covering the ground 
Blanketing everything in its path 
Unrelenting 
Everywhere
Slippery
The Step
The Slip 
The Crash 
The Death
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2 comments:

  1. ErikaZMarch 27, 2013 at 4:16 PM

    I thought this piece was very well laid out. The line "unrelenting" really caught my attention. I would suggest taking one line out of the "the" section-- perhaps "the step"? This way the lines could function together as a syntactical pattern. Nice job!

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  2. Michael HJune 10, 2013 at 9:30 AM

    Well that escalated quickly

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